14 comments

  • AJ MAJ M, over 6 years ago

    Beautiful but overly trendy for my taste.

    3 points
    • Luke James TaylorLuke James Taylor, over 6 years ago

      Asad, is this your portfolio? https://1ric.com/ — it's ironically similar to Jonathan's.

      Can you please elaborate on what it means to be overly trendy? Genuinely intrigued.

      3 points
      • AJ MAJ M, over 6 years ago

        The only thing similar is the mono font, no? I was mainly referring to that particular shade of blue combined with the clean san serif headings/mono text.

        0 points
  • Mike Kingsborough, over 6 years ago

    Hey Jonathan, Good luck.

    I've noticed one language inconsistency and I would urge you do another pass on all language; The thumbnails on your homepage aren't grouped under a title or heading but In the hamburger navigation you refer to them "work" and on a work page you refer to them "case studies". My opinion is that you should be using one term across all pages. Remember, case studies are meant to include research and it's rationalisation.

    Regards.

    2 points
  • Josiah TullisJosiah Tullis, over 6 years ago

    Looks great, I love the iconography.

    1 point
  • Ed Penkov, over 6 years ago

    Nice work! I think at the end of your case study you should add link to the next work. It's little uncomfortable to go back on the main page and then open another work.

    1 point
    • Jonathan Alpmyr, over 6 years ago

      Thanks man! Yeah, I've thought about that. I did actually start to design that feature two days ago (in the last minute) but decided to launch without it since I thought that was just another thing holding me back from finally launching the site, haha. But I will try to add it soon :)

      1 point
  • Markus BerghMarkus Bergh, over 6 years ago

    Fin sida. :)

    0 points
    • Jonathan Alpmyr, over 6 years ago

      Tack! Kollade in din portfolio också, riktigt grym!

      0 points
      • Markus BerghMarkus Bergh, over 6 years ago

        Brukar hitta något jag vill ge som konstruktiv kritik, men jag tyckte det var spot on med din!

        Tack, inte tillräckligt för att postas här dock. Men kanske i framtiden, haha. :)

        0 points
  • Jordan BJordan B, over 6 years ago

    You might change the apostrophe in "I'm" to a smart apostrophe (e.g. "I’m"). It's the little things, right? Otherwise a beautiful site.

    0 points