• Adam Brace, almost 8 years ago

    Another Semplice site...

    3 points
  • Thompson GeorgeThompson George, almost 8 years ago

    "And apparently studying for my BSc degree." gives me the feeling that you don't care about school. Which maybe you don't. But if you do you should consider rephrasing.

    2 points
    • Robert Deniszczyc, almost 8 years ago

      I came here to comment the exact same thing.

      Even if you don't care about academia (I refrain from calling university "school" or to some extent 'education' per se but that's another conversation) it doesn't look good to phrase things in this way. A degree should be something to enjoy and focus towards achieving, it's not something to be taken lightly or be shrugged off. It comes across almost as lazy and unfocussed.

      Nicely designed site overall though.

      0 points
    • Yannick Pulver, almost 8 years ago

      Thank you for giving me feedback! I absolutely enjoy studying and should have spent more time creating a phrase which express this. I will go over this text again.

      0 points