• Julius Tarng, almost 11 years ago

    writing is harder than making fast decisions while designing. any feedback is appreciated on the content or the writing

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  • joe andersonjoe anderson, almost 11 years ago

    I'll be your ring mr. tarngerine

    I like this writing style. Write how you would speak as if you are telling someone this in real life. That feels like the best writing style because of how natural it is. Wish I could give you some critique but I'm not the best writer :(

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