• stephen fstephen f, over 3 years ago

    I only had a quick look around as I'm about to finish for the day.

    The work you're putting out looks really interesting and the whole website at quick scan level looks really nice/professional.

    However, if you want negatives (well areas to improve): Id say the initial page is a little underwhelming and doesn't really sell how good your work actually is. and the "marketing strategy" whiteboard with pen, even if it's not, looks very generic and stock photo.

    ... i'll probably come back and edit this once i've had a better look, but as nobody has commented, thought i'd get the ball rolling.

    4 points
    • , over 3 years ago

      Thanks for the input! Can't wait to hear more from you, how do you think the homepage can be improved? What do you think about the copywriting? Thanks in advance.

      1 point
  • Thomas Michael SemmlerThomas Michael Semmler, over 3 years ago

    Living for this luxury feeling moment. I think you'll be attracting a certain type of project / client with this, which is hopefully what you want. This looks very intentional and well executed to this intention. Though I would probably remove the "Curiosity" from your about page. I personally feel like these values should be reflected in the entire UX somewhere, but I don't think it is. This is giving me mature, decided, highly devoted to a certain aesthetic, high-valued. Curiosity is not reflected in there at all.

    Can you maybe elaborate on the "alphamark" brand name? I immediately assume tons of negative things, especially when that company is run by men only that don't seem to be true. I just find the choice of word curious and would find the story and thought process behind it interesting.

    2 points
  • brad wrage, over 3 years ago

    Looking similar to https://thescenery.co/

    2 points
  • Kawaine NelsonKawaine Nelson, over 3 years ago

    Nice and clean, there's just one thing the video in the background is a bit too hard to see at first I missed it or maybe it was still loading but apart for that nice site.

    2 points
  • Joe Roberto, over 3 years ago

    Website breaks using the Brave Browser

    1 point
  • Braden HammBraden Hamm, over 3 years ago

    I love the colors.

    1 point