• Luna EclipseLuna Eclipse, over 3 years ago

    Hi Taylor!

    Thank you for your comment, actually this design belongs to my coworker, she didn't know about DesignerNews and tried to create an account but couldn't share her work for some reason. That's why I offered her to share it from my account to get feedback, thank you for your concern tho :)

    3 points
    • Taylor PalmerTaylor Palmer, over 3 years ago

      Thanks for the context!

      As for actual feedback:

      • not sure what story the illustration is telling. The paper airplane makes me feel like a contract is being “sent”, but I think the character on the right is actually creating it?
      • it follows the trend of “small people making really large things” that has been popular for a while, for what it’s worth
      • the color palette is nice and works well with the site
      • the poses of the characters feel a little stiff. Exaggerating the pose more might bring some more emotion to them.
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