I totally get where you are coming from with this — even though I don't necessarily feel the same way about certain things — and I do agree with some of the comments that it comes off like it was written from a defensive standpoint. Almost out of anger, even.
We tried to communicate the same thing, check it out and maybe you can pick something up to incorporate into your page: https://sprawsm.com/terms-of-service/
"Don't get it wrong - I am not your employee - and you are not my boss." Actually, you are - and they are.
No they are not. What Lior is aiming at with this as far as I can tell, is that he wants to make it known that a client can't apply the same principles and expectations towards him, as he may do to their employees. E.g. if he requires his employees to check email outside business hours, he can't make Lior do the same, as he runs his own ship.
All in all, I think it is good that you want to be up front with your potential clients, I would just rethink the tone and try not to sound bitter, like you've had it rough (even though you very well may have).
I totally get where you are coming from with this — even though I don't necessarily feel the same way about certain things — and I do agree with some of the comments that it comes off like it was written from a defensive standpoint. Almost out of anger, even.
We tried to communicate the same thing, check it out and maybe you can pick something up to incorporate into your page: https://sprawsm.com/terms-of-service/
No they are not. What Lior is aiming at with this as far as I can tell, is that he wants to make it known that a client can't apply the same principles and expectations towards him, as he may do to their employees. E.g. if he requires his employees to check email outside business hours, he can't make Lior do the same, as he runs his own ship.
All in all, I think it is good that you want to be up front with your potential clients, I would just rethink the tone and try not to sound bitter, like you've had it rough (even though you very well may have).