I get what you mean, but I'm happy with it where it is now. I want the animations to feel really smooth, which doesn't happen if they go too quickly.
This I totally agree with, but the delay was intentional. It's meant to be read in a certain order (the large text first, then the small text) with the appropriate headings for each paragraph still intact. Whether that works/is a good idea or not is hard to say.
Thanks for the clearly well-structured critique.
I get what you mean, but I'm happy with it where it is now. I want the animations to feel really smooth, which doesn't happen if they go too quickly.
This I totally agree with, but the delay was intentional. It's meant to be read in a certain order (the large text first, then the small text) with the appropriate headings for each paragraph still intact. Whether that works/is a good idea or not is hard to say.
Agreed.
Super-Agreed.